Sighs

Sighs

IN the wintry night,
Under a pale, cold light,
I can see my sighs.
They drop like hammers
From my mouth.

In space
Infinite
I suppose they would fall like
Feathers
– Infinitely –

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2 thoughts on “Sighs

  1. sarwah2012 says:

    i feel the poem, especially because I sigh all the time. But I think it should have ended with Indefinitely rather then Infinitely.

  2. omazzle says:

    Thanks for your feedback sarwah2012. I wanted to mull over it for a while before replying, but ‘Infinitely’ feels like the right word for what I wanted to convey.

    I’m glad that you can take something different from it though – I’d be happy if my poems could mean all things to all people.

    Anybody else who reads this (or any of my other poems/posts) would be glad to hear what you think – improvements or otherwise.

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